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| sent on June 27, 2012 (12:45) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Very beautiful model's face, perhaps the blouse deserved some more attention in the recovery phase, to remove the creases on board body but I kept out of the scene at the bare dell'obellico, sistemandola so as not to leave shares stressed ch einterferiscono with the harmony of forms.
Once (in my time, not so long ago :)) you would have said that a picture that shows at least a little light in his eyes, at least enough to have to show what color they are, would have been a photo to be redone. (I'm there remained faithful to this way of evaluating the photos depicting people). Your photo I find it a good start but I personally believe that there is room for improvement in the recovery phase mean.
The lower part of the model suffers from the lack of light, strong shadow between the two legs penalizes the lot, anthat blacks are a little too close to the level of the shoes. I would have preferred him to wear socks less "heavy" less dark, more transparent and in line with the apparent sensitivity of the model. Molto bello il viso della modella, forse la camicietta meritava qualche attenzione in più in fase di ripresa, per togliere le pieghe a bordo body ma anche avrei tenuto fuori dalla scena la parte scoperta all'altezza dell'obellico, sistemandola in modo da non lasciare parti stressate ch einterferiscono con l'armonia delle forme.
Una volta (ai miei tempi, non molto lontani :) ) si sarebbe detto che una foto che non mostra almeno un po di luce negli occhi, almeno quanto basta da far vedere di che colore sono, sarebbe stata una foto da rifare. (io ci sono rimasto fedele a questo modo di valutare le foto che ritraggono le persone). La tua foto la trovo una buona partenza ma personalmente credo che ci sia spazio per migliorarla in fase di ripresa intendo.
La parte bassa della modella soffre della mancanza d'illuminazione, la forte ombra tra le due gambe la penalizza molto, anche i neri rimangono un po troppo chiusi a livello delle scarpe. Avrei preferito che indossasse delle calze meno "pesanti" meno scure, più trasparenti ed in linea con l'apparente delicatezza della modella. |
| sent on June 27, 2012 (20:56) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
I think the photo is suitable for b / w. would make a lot more. Secondo me la foto si presta per il b/n. renderebbe molto di più. |
| sent on June 27, 2012 (21:29) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
@ Baldassarre thank you very much for your valuable advice, I can only agree with you. It was the second time in my life that I photographed a girl, I hope to be improved a bit 'in the months and hope to do even better ;-)
@ Pino gave me a nice idea, I'll try to change it in B / W @Baldassarre ti ringrazio vivamente per i tuoi preziosissimi pareri, non posso che darti ragione. Era la seconda volta in vita mia che fotografavo una ragazza, spero d'essere migliorato un po' nei mesi e spero di fare sempre meglio 
@Pino mi hai dato una bella idea, proverò a mutarla in B/N |
| sent on June 27, 2012 (21:45) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
I agree with Baldassarre: looks like a montage ... From the "waist" upward, from the "waist down" ... Anyway, great shot and excellent yield of whites. Concordo con Baldassarre:sembra un fotomontaggio...Dalla "cintola" in sù, dalla "cintola in giù"...Comunque ottimo scatto e ottima resa dei bianchi. |
| sent on July 27, 2014 (9:54) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
I blurred the background. My modest parere.Ciao, max Avrei sfocato lo sfondo. Mio modesto parere.Ciao, max |
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